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Post by Oceancrumbles on Jul 1, 2013 21:39:18 GMT
Character Info
Name: Aleena Gray Field
Race: Magical human.
Sex: Female
Age: 18
Faction: undecided
Power: telekinesis
Rune or code: (Fill this out once you complete your quest for it. Only Admin start with a rune or code)
Appearance: (Please be as descriptive as you can here. One paragraph minimum.) She has blonde hair, and green eyes. When she uses her power of telekinesis her usually light green eyes turn a dark gray and her blonde hair turns almost white. She has pale skin and pink plump lips. She is of a slender build. She has a scar on her forehead from where her abusive father dropped her when she was three.
Personality: (Again, please be as descriptive as you can. One paragraph minimum.) She is a spunky chick. She likes to play nice with others but she can be revengeful. She doesn't like it when you mess with her friends. She is an occasional drinker and smoker. She dresses in a modest manner.
Strengths: (What is your character good at doing?) She can easily move things with a simple thought
Weaknesses: (What is your character weak at doing or what are their fears?) She is essentially afraid that no guy will ever want to be with her because of her weird power. also that one day she might turn evil like her father.
Biography: (This is the background and history of your character and essentially one of the most, if not the most, important categories. Put the bulk of your time and effort into this Two paragraphs minimum but we highly encourage for you to go beyond that!)
She never finished high school. She dropped out when she was seventeen, so a year ago. She lives away from home now. She finally found the nerve to leave when her father almost killed her one drunken night. When she was fifteen she took on a drinking and smoking habit. Her mother was never in the picture. She doesn't know exactly what happened to her but she assumes she probably ran away to get away from the two freaks.
She started showing signs of her abilities when she was just six. It was a horrible moment and no one was there to console her. Her father just the same drunk mess that he always was. The day she turned seven, she finally had control of her power. It was tragic experience for her to go to school. Sometimes she would find herself losing control, and moving the blinds. From then on, she became this social outcast. She would talk to people yet not really connect.
Other: (Anything else you’d like to share with us?) Shes afraid of love. and shes a victim of domestic abuse.
Picture: (If you want to use a picture place it here. Please do not stretch out the boards.
Basically looks like Avril Lavigne
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Post by Parrot on Jul 1, 2013 22:05:44 GMT
Just a few things that need to be fixed. The race is just "Magical human" and since your character has ESP related powers the term "Elemental" would be confusing because we use that expression for Elemental based characters. So the "like a Elemental almost" is unnecessary. Characters are only allowed to have one power for the time being, sorry. There are a few ESP related powers that would work from what you've written. Please take a moment to look over this list and choose one. thewarformagic.proboards.com/thread/46/Once you choose an ability that works for you then edit your application in the areas that are specific to that ability (personality and biography) From what I gather those sections depend on what power you choose for your character. For the picture you can add it with the code: [img]IMGURLHERE[/img] If you need help with that just send me the picture you want to use and I will put it in for you Also: If you're unsure of what we're looking for in our applications take a look at the accepted characters. We have some awesome creative writers here who can serve as wonderful examples.
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Post by Oceancrumbles on Jul 2, 2013 6:10:11 GMT
I edited it but I dont know if i really want to put a picture. Takes away the creativity. Just that she looks similar to Avril.
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Post by Parrot on Jul 2, 2013 13:59:22 GMT
Awesome, thanks for doing that! And no worries about the picture, that's quite alright.
Accepted.
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